NEW SONG: Naked Ambition

[autographedcat]

Inspired by a conversation with folkmew over in kitanzi's journal

Naked Ambition
by Rob Wynne
TTTO: "Close To You" by Burt Bacharach and Hal David

Why do I, every time I dream,
Picture you....and whipped cream?
It's just like me to want to see
Clothes off you....

I forget what I meant to say
When you wear lingerie;
That is why I long to spy
Clothes off you...

On the day that you were born
You came out wearing nothing
That's the reason that it's called a birthday suit...
Please understand, from where I stand
That birthday suit you're wearing is a beaut!

I admit...I'm not a subtle guy.
It's not hard to see why
I approve each time you remove
Clothes from you

Comments

[folkmew.livejournal.com]

Not bad! But you really should have made it scan to "Whipped Cream" from "Whipped Cream and Other Delights" (grin - course if you had no one would be able to play/sing it - oh well)
Man I remember that album from my youth! I loved that cover. I was so intrigued by that cover. I wanted to BE that cover. ;-)

[thatcrazycajun.livejournal.com]

Love it, love it, LUUUUVE IT!

Snicker

[mbumby.livejournal.com]

Like.

[catalana.livejournal.com]

And I'm singing it to Daniel's "Close Your Eyes"...

[callibr8]

There's one bit of scansion I'm tripping over... maybe the line could be revised to:

I forget what I meant to say

... just wondering. :)

[sarekofvulcan.livejournal.com]

*applauds wildly*

I'll have to use that on Donna sometime. :-)