ext_31510 (
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2004-02-24 01:59 pm (UTC)
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>>S1, L5: Against the Shadow's might
>>The first word feels off, with the stresses in the wrong place; I'd almost prefer "'Gainst all the >>Shadow's Might".
>Hrm. I don't see it, but again have on strenuous objection to it.
Agree that stressing "against" on the first syllable sounds forced. How about "Facing the Shadow's Might"?
spelling note: Pelennor Fields.
Nice song!
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>>The first word feels off, with the stresses in the wrong place; I'd almost prefer "'Gainst all the >>Shadow's Might".
>Hrm. I don't see it, but again have on strenuous objection to it.
Agree that stressing "against" on the first syllable sounds forced. How about "Facing the Shadow's Might"?
spelling note: Pelennor Fields.
Nice song!