It's ok. As I've noted elsewhere in the comments, I kind of enjoy it even as I mock it. And yes, the underlying story has a lot of merit, but the execution is what brings it down.
This story *could* be done better, but it wasn't. But it's charming in its obvious awfulness. :)
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Date: 2010-05-28 06:45 pm (UTC)This story *could* be done better, but it wasn't. But it's charming in its obvious awfulness. :)